Revision Up-date

Thanks to everyone who has given me crits so far! I really appreciate it, you guys are helping a ton!!!!!!!!!!!!! So far I've got 21 things to tweak based on critiques that I've received. I've worked on the scene today. Some things took longer than others, so I only got 7.5 of the things on my list done. That's still progress though, and some progress is much better than none. I hope to have 7 more things done by this time tomorrow. :D Here's an up-date:

The Vacation h264 2.33mb
http://studentpages.scad.edu/~jcofer20/c4week12Revision2.mov

The Vacation sorenson 5.38mb
http://studentpages.scad.edu/~jcofer...12Revision.mov