My Critique
I've recieved my critique from my mentor. He said the only major changes I should make are:
1. Move the match away from the bear, he's supposed to threaten it, not catch it on fire
2. Move Bishop's hand to the bear's shoulder so he doesn't seem so aggressive.
3. Adjust the position of the head in the last pose
He says that what I have now is funny and that it'll be solid once I start animating. I hope he's right. :
I expect to have an up-date sometime today.
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